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Thank you for submitting your comics through WenAll this time!
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It is said.
The density of the picture, the coolness of the composition, etc.
of the picture
Great work, a pleasure to read:
On the other hand, I am concerned about a few things.
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It is delivered
It seems difficult to do
~I am inspired.
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There is a main character
The goal is to bend or worry about the barriers and leave the leaves.
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Do something
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of the story
It’s hot.
The work comes in the form
What do you want to organize and draw and what are the themes?
It’s an artificial way of thinking.
Reader through action
to deliver
by way of thinking
I hope so.
As of now, it’s possible for the story to go somewhere (who knows what).
It would be good to read with anticipation of what will happen and who will happen.
I get the impression that it is difficult to understand.
So in the structure of the story
Read various works
I thought that if you researched it, I would chase you.
@ About drawing skills
For now
It’s not enough
I’m young. want to express
and images
Skills keep up
Do you have the impression that you can’t do it?
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Improve your drawing skills
Build up training every day
If you face it
(It doesn’t seem like much:
what is happening
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No impression
Therefore, it is conveyed to the reader who is doing what and where.
It is an argument that is easy to understand.
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While screen
If you configure it, I won’t pursue it further.
I’m young.
That’s it.
Thank you for your review for future work.
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Is this real?
Wow!
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This is your future village.
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It is called Ki.
After seeing the submitted work,
Feel something very shining! It’s not fun.
I would like to [hope to be in charge]
It is as I contacted you.
Therefore, about how to proceed in the future, etc.
It would be great if you could consult with me.
If you can, please email me
Thanks for your answer.
Thank you for your review!
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